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16:48 (Anonymous)[Lien] | >So he was there, lying in the ground with his broken neck and Juand even couldn´t shout, he was paralyzed and no one could know he needed help, because it was very late and there were a very few people in the Retiro.
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So he was there, lying on the ground with his neck broken so he couldn´t even shout. In addition to that, it was very late so there were very few people in Retiro. Juan was paralyzed and could not get any help.
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