| a haiku-senryu hybrid |
[Aug. 31st, 2003|11:39 am] |
no words
for her alien beauty
...summer steppe |
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| haiku translations |
[Aug. 31st, 2003|11:11 pm] |
actually, if we follow the WHC classification, all my haiku are senryu :-) thank god we have classificators, otherwise we would never know what we do in life.
http://www.livejournal.com/community/ru_hokku/137693.html
it's a lot of fun to work in two languages. sometimes there are layers of thought that i need to peel off to get to the right idea. i can almost visualize my i-language like the sweet core beneath thin bitter onion skins of e-languages.
i think i'm ready for the second stage of my haiku model. ta-da! |
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| senryu |
[Aug. 31st, 2003|11:17 pm] |
here's a real senryu that talks about humans, has a word play, a witticism, and a couple of subtle connections.
Intercontinental flight -
the chinese man's hair
is grey too |
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