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Пишет vadim_i_z ([info]vadim_i_z)
@ 2010-08-11 10:30:00


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Grammar
Американский физик Джордж Тригг (George L. Trigg) в бытность свою редактором журнала "The Physical Review Letters" постоянно, но безуспешно пытался втолковать авторам, что приносимые ими статьи должны быть безупречными не только с научной, но и с грамматической точки зрения. Отчаявшись, он написал и опубликовал в своем журнале (Phys.Rev.Lett.,1979, 42, 12, 748) несколько ехидных советов.
Русскоязычная их версия хорошо знакома всем. А вот и первоисточник:

It is said that back in the 1940's, the following message was prominently displayed at the front of the main chemistry lecture hall at a major university:
"The English language is your most versatile scientific instrument.
Learn to use it with precision."
In the intervening years, the teaching of proper grammar in the public elementary and high schools fell into disfavor. The inevitable result is that manuscripts submitted to us are often full of grammatical errors, which their authors probably do not even recognize (and often would not care about if they did).

We regard this state of affairs as deplorable, and we want to do something about it. For many years we have tried to correct the grammar of papers that we publish. This is toilsome at best, and sometimes entails rather substantial rephrasing. It would obviously be preferable to have authors use correct grammar in the first place. The problem is how to get them to do it.

One fairly effective way is to provide examples of what not to do; it is particularly helpful if the examples are humorous. We have recently seen several lists of grammatical examples of this type. A few weeks ago we found taped to a colleague's office door the most complete one we have seen. (He tells us it was passed out in a class of Darthmouth - not in English - at the time a term paper was assigned). We reproduce it here in the hope that it will have some effect.

  1. Make sure each pronoun agrees with their antecedent.
  2. Just between you and I, the case of pronoun is important.
  3. Watch out for irregular verbs which have crope into English.
  4. Verbs has to agree in number with their subjects.
  5. Don't use no double negatives.
  6. Being bad grammar, a writer should not use dangling modifiers.
  7. Join clauses good like a conjunction should.
  8. A writer must be not shift your point of view.
  9. About sentence fragments.
  10. Don't use run-on sentences you got to punctuate them.
  11. In letters essays and reports use commas to separate items in series.
  12. Don't use commas, which are not necessary.
  13. Parenthetical words however should be enclosed in commas.
  14. Its important to use apostrophes right in everybodys writing.
  15. Don't abbrev.
  16. Check to see if you any words out.
  17. In the case of a report, check to see that jargonwise, it's A-OK.
  18. As far as incomplete constructions, they are wrong.
  19. About repetition, the repetition of a word might be real effective repetition - take, for instance the repetition of Abraham Lincoln.
  20. In my opinion, I think that an author when he is writing should definitely not get into the habit of making use of too many unnecessary words that he does not really need in order to put his message across.
  21. Use parallel construction not only to be concise but also clarify.
  22. It behooves us all to avoid archaic expressions.
  23. Mixed metaphors are a pain in the neck and ought to be weeded out.
  24. Consult the dictionery to avoid mispelings.
  25. To ignorantly split an infinitive is a practice to religiously avoid.
  26. Last but not least, lay off cliches.

George L. Trigg
Phys.Rev.Lett., 42, 12, 748 (1979).



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[info]spamsink@lj
2010-08-11 04:15 (ссылка)
22 и 25 противоречат друг другу.

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[info]vadim_i_z@lj
2010-08-11 05:00 (ссылка)
Или дополняют друг друга...
Я, кстати, по книжке Тригга (http://www.vova1001.ru/00005392.htm) готовил несколько вопросов, когда сдавал кандидатский минимум. Хорошая книжица.

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[info]lemuel55@lj
2010-08-11 04:25 (ссылка)
Эге ж!
This is the kind of English up with which I shall not put.
Остроумно, конечно.

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[info]guamoka@lj
2010-08-11 10:49 (ссылка)
Это какой-то джёрман.

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[info]spamsink@lj
2010-08-11 19:45 (ссылка)
Это, согласно легенде, сказал Черчилль, когда ему сообщили, что в английском языке sentences must not end with a preposition.

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[info]fregimus@lj
2010-08-11 04:41 (ссылка)
Грамматисты почем зря домогаются до раздельного инфинитива.

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[info]spamsink@lj
2010-08-11 19:45 (ссылка)
Дедушка Тригг старый, доверчивый...

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[info]guamoka@lj
2010-08-11 10:51 (ссылка)
К чёрту войну, главное манёвры!

ЗЫ. Кстати, относительно программистов с поправкой на язык многое применимо, потому как "но ведь работает!".

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[info]r_p@lj
2010-08-11 14:19 (ссылка)
А я долгое время был знаком именно с англоязычной версией, про русскую адаптацию узнал много позже.
Впрочем, с какой-то другой, проапгрейженной версией (их там, видимо, тоже тьмы). Помню, например, отсутствующий в оригинале пункт "Profanity sucks!"

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[info]drfinger@lj
2010-08-11 16:01 (ссылка)
А у меня с фидошных времен хранятся вот такие правила -- похоже, пример Тригга вдохновил кого-то на собственное творчество. По-моему, тоже неплохо получилось (особенно мне нравятся 14 и 32).

"Rules for Writerers:"

1. Verbs HAS to agree with their subjects.
2. Prepositions are not words to end sentences with.
3. And don't start a sentence with a conjunction.
4. It is wrong to ever split an infinitive.
5. Avoid cliches like the plague. (They're old hat.)
6. Also, always avoid annoying alliteration.
7. Be more or less specific.
8. Parenthetical remarks (however relevant) are (usually)
unnecessary.
9. Also too, never, ever use repetitive redundancies.
10. No sentence fragments.
11. Contractions aren't necessary and shouldn't be used.
12. Foreign words and phrases are not apropos.
13. Do not be redundant; do not use more words than
necessary; it's highly superfluous.
14. One should NEVER generalize.
15. Comparisons are as bad as cliches.
16. Don't use no double negatives.
17. Eschew ampersands & abbreviations, etc.
18. One-word sentences? Eliminate.
19. Analogies in writing are like feathers on a snake.
20. The passive voice is to be ignored.
21. Eliminate commas, that are, not necessary. Parenthetical words however
should be enclosed in commas.
22. Never use a big word when substituting a diminutive one
would suffice.
23. Kill all exclamation points!!!
24. Use words correctly, irregardless of how others use
them.
25. Understatement is always the absolute best way to put
forth earth-shaking ideas.
26. Use the apostrophe in it's proper place and omit it
when its not needed.
27. Eliminate quotations. As Ralph Waldo Emerson said, "I
hate quotations. Tell me what you know."
28. If you've heard it once, you've heard it a thousand times: Resist
hyperbole; not one writer in a million can use it correctly.
29. Puns are for children, not groan readers.
30. Go around the barn at high noon to avoid colloquialisms.
31. Even IF a mixed metaphor sings, it should be derailed.
32. Who needs rhetorical questions?
33. Exaggeration is a billion times worse than understatement.
34. Avoid "buzz-words"; such integrated transitional scenarios complicate
simplistic matters.
And finally...
35. Proofread carefully to see if you any words out.

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