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haku: translations [Mar. 31st, 2003|09:17 pm]
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John Brandi

from "HAIKU MOMENT"



in the rain

before the dawn: snails

migrating

 под дождем

на рассвете на марше:

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From:[info]pggmilltn@lj
Date:March 31st, 2003 - 05:44 pm
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I sense a childrens song in that haiku

"Its raining
It's pouring
The snails are
migrating

something something
da da da
da dee de words and wo-ords"
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From:[info]watertank@lj
Date:April 1st, 2003 - 04:47 pm

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yeah, I can see children and snails marching and singing in the rain :-)
From:[info]another_goner@lj
Date:March 31st, 2003 - 05:48 pm
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в дождь
перед рассветом
улитки ползут
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From:[info]watertank@lj
Date:April 1st, 2003 - 04:51 pm
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хорошо получилось. даже лучше :-)
From:[info]another_goner@lj
Date:April 1st, 2003 - 09:55 pm
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спасибо :)
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From:[info]ediblesnail@lj
Date:March 31st, 2003 - 06:33 pm
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И это Я!
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From:[info]watertank@lj
Date:April 1st, 2003 - 04:54 pm

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Да здравствуют отважно ползущие улитки!
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From:[info]edbook@lj
Date:April 2nd, 2003 - 12:39 am
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I hear them
from here in the desert
slugs munching my garden

Peace